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Heaven

Heaven is a palace full of peace where war doesn't exist and at the same time, famine Eternity dances in the realm at its center, causing clouds to make it rain endless love

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Date: 4/24/2018 12:04:00 AM
Nice Imagery for Heaven. We expect as a palace of peace. Love
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Date: 4/21/2018 4:53:00 PM
another heavenly one!! I see these are very short. NOw I will ask the question I have for you in soupmail
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Date: 4/13/2018 10:20:00 AM
This is heavenly and a place that I would love to be! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 4/11/2018 12:07:00 PM
"a palace full of peace" - lovely image Vermillion.
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:34:00 AM
War, death pain, tears etc. never existed in heaven, so these former things removed from the earth, where have existed too long. bbn
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:35:00 PM
Beautiful poem !! All the best to you..
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