Heaven

Heaven
is a palace full of peace
where war doesn't exist
and at the same time, famine
Eternity dances in the realm
at its center, causing clouds
to make it rain endless love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
April 24, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Nice Imagery for Heaven. We expect as a palace of peace. Love
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:53 PM
another heavenly one!! I see these are very short. NOw I will ask the question I have for you in soupmail
Sietesantos Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:20 AM
This is heavenly and a place that I would love to be! Hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 12:07 PM
"a palace full of peace" - lovely image Vermillion.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 12:34 AM
War, death pain, tears etc. never existed in heaven, so these former things removed from the earth, where have existed too long. bbn
B. Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:35 PM
Beautiful poem !! All the best to you..
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