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Heat...No Heat

Backyard swimming pool

             was a cooling treat haven,

                 lonely under clouds...

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Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2010 at 3:50 PM

Mine has been lonely also except for the Cliff Swallows that have just loved swooping down and drinking the cool pure water..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this evening..I was gifted to have you choose one of mine to read today..Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

August 19, 2010 at 7:44 AM

:) you got that right. Since it is the summer, pools are not lonely. Well written Senryu, Jay. Thanks for your comments on my poem today. Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

August 18, 2010 at 3:29 PM

Beautifully written, Jay. You're making me miss the pool I had before I moved to my father's house. Now I have to swim in the ocean, but fresh water is far more appealing. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 18, 2010 at 10:23 AM

What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Jay. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol

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