Heather the Liar

Shallow,
A dried up lake,
A sun parched ocean
Cracking lips,
Upon thinning hips,
Growing lies,
Make me grow more wise,

Shallow,
The substance used to be there,
But it has left us,
For the sun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 17, 2016 at 12:04 AM
Caitlin Dwinnell, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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May 14, 2016 at 2:43 PM
CAITLIN, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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