Heated Strings

He touches her in ways no one else can
He holds her gently 
Yet his grip is firm
His fingers dance over her
He makes her moan out his rhythms
Together they are magical
Bringing forth passion 
As they sing out the Blues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:51 PM
GREAT win. congrats. Luv, andrea
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February 17, 2010 at 5:36 PM
enjoyed, congrats on the win!
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February 11, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Filled with passion and emotion. Wonderful way to capture the essence of his music. Congratulations on placing second in Raul's contest. Way to go!!! Enjoy your success! Karen
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February 11, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in the B.B. King contest...Enjoyed your HOT poem...Marty
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February 11, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Congrats Christi on your second place win in the BB King Contest.. an amazing write ...an amazing win.. an amazing musician.. an amazing tribute.. enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 11, 2010 at 8:11 AM
What a great piece on B.B.King and his passion for Lucille!! Congratulations on this amazing win, Christi. You made a guitar, flesh and blood in this poem!! Love, Carrie
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February 11, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Excellent Christi! I love it! congrats-Robert
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February 11, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's B B King Contest Christi. Every poem on the winners list was an outstanding piece. Love, Carol
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February 11, 2010 at 1:17 AM
Christi, congrats in placing 2nd...Raul
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February 4, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Wonderful romance in this write, Christi. Thank you for your blog comments. Sometimes the contests do help us break out of a "slump" in inspiration and I can see from this poem that you are motivated again! Love, Carolyn
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February 3, 2010 at 9:27 PM
THANKS FOR FEELING MY POETRY IT'S HARD FOR SOME TO UNDERSTAND. IT ALL COMES FROM THE HEART ..N.. IMAGINATION..IN ONE'S LIFE
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