Heat Rites

On a dark night when a fire’s lit
  Begins an orange glow that sparks 
                   
                     To burst into tongues of flames that
                      Lick the innocent air.
               
          A fire blazes red-hot
          And splashed with water, it is not …
     
  On a sultry summer day, the sea shimmers
  With silver sparkles, warmed; in the aftermath
  Of white crested waves that lick the shore 
  And spent, they die again to be reborn
  To ride a wave to kiss the shore,
  And be no more…       
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rozario Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 10:58 AM
Great write Sherese...like it lots...a belated congratulation on your wonderful win & thank you for stopping by on my page.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 6:13 AM
This is lovely Sherese i can feel it, thanks for stopping by my stuff and do not be afraid of each stage in life xx
Gooden Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 6:17 AM
You're welcome Mandy. I wont.
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:34 PM
Wow, this is a GREAT one. I see it was in the heat contest but I don't know what rating you got. Anyway, a well deserved win in my opinion!
Gooden Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Thank you Andrea. Appreciate.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on your win...excellent piece here!!! :)
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:22 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie''s "Heat" contest Sherese. Love, Carol
Gooden Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Thank you Carol. Nice hearing from you.
Williams Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Sherese congrats on your win...excellent similie..David
Gooden Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Thank you David.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Many congratulations on your win Sherese xx
Gooden Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Thank you Mandy.
May Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 8:36 PM
congrats on your win Sherese...nicely done...love
Gooden Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Thanks Joe.
Palmer Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 11:45 AM
nice Sherese,loving your poetry
Gooden Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Nice hearing from you Richard. Thanks for stopping by.
May Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 6:09 AM
nicely done Sherese....I enjoyed this "rite"....love ...Joseph
Gooden Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Thanks always.
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