Heat

Heat rises
\around us down
your sidewalk shimmers
and we sit
\on the porch
swimming in heat
sitting still enough 
vapor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 28, 2010 at 12:19 PM
makes me think of so many metaphors and similes...yet you tell us none? I know you could "plump this verse up" Light & Love
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September 10, 2010 at 11:22 PM
nice one, enjoyed this read tonight, best wishes this weekend..P.D.
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