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Heat rises \around us down your sidewalk shimmers and we sit \on the porch swimming in heat sitting still enough vapor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 12:19:00 PM
makes me think of so many metaphors and similes...yet you tell us none? I know you could "plump this verse up" Light & Love
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Date: 9/10/2010 11:22:00 PM
nice one, enjoyed this read tonight, best wishes this weekend..P.D.
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