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Heat waves shimmering Ground hot as molten lava Summer saying good-by

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/31/2009 12:14:00 AM
Nice one Karla.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 8/30/2009 11:39:00 PM
Karla, i wish we had a decent summer in Scotland to say goodbye to, Heat sapping Haiku>>James
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Date: 8/30/2009 11:04:00 AM
soup mail!
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Date: 8/20/2009 12:31:00 PM
Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 8/20/2009 5:06:00 AM
Excellent Haiku Karla. You told it like it is. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2009 4:40:00 AM
beautiful and progressive continuity. i wait for your autumn to play with leaves.
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Date: 8/19/2009 7:23:00 PM
Yes, and I am ready, I love autumn, the cool, and the pretty leaves, Sincerely Moses
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