Heat

Heat waves shimmering
Ground hot as molten lava
Summer saying good-by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
August 31, 2009 at 12:14 AM
Nice one Karla.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Fraser Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Karla, i wish we had a decent summer in Scotland to say goodbye to, Heat sapping Haiku>>James
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August 30, 2009 at 11:04 AM
soup mail!
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August 20, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Enjoyed it. Karen
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 5:06 AM
Excellent Haiku Karla. You told it like it is. Love, Carol
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August 20, 2009 at 4:40 AM
beautiful and progressive continuity. i wait for your autumn to play with leaves.
Freeman Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 7:23 PM
Yes, and I am ready, I love autumn, the cool, and the pretty leaves, Sincerely Moses
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