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Submitted on 07/30/2025 for <7 Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Rob Carmack. Date originally written: 08/08/2020

Heat

one cold dark night,
 
        two bodies, chafing...

        against the other;

kindled fire!
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Alex Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 7:37 PM
Great verse. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Drowley Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 11:25 AM
'Edward, Excellent write. Crisp, concise, and clear. Keep up the good work! David'
Ibeh Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, David:-)
Sambourne Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Short and powerful. A superb piece to celebrate passion as fire. Best wishes Brian
Ibeh Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, Brian:-)
Kauffman Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 9:46 PM
Edward, beautiful poem of hot and cold - night and fire. Congratulations on your top first place win! Fiery words!
Ibeh Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 9:49 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) Most appreciated.
Watt Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Ooh, I feel the heat coming from the friction... well done, sir! Congrats on your win ~ John
Ibeh Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 9:44 AM
Thank you, John:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Enjoy your win and day.............
Ibeh Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Paula:-)
Dutta Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 9:16 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on our romance.
Ibeh Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 4:12 AM
Thank you, Anisha:-) Have a blessed day!
Roper Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Edward, this is so romantic. Good luck in the contest I think Brian will like it. And I love your form as you notice I use it quite frequently.
Ibeh Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much, Eve:-) I hope he likes it. I love, LOVE reading your Yaltos...they blow my mind!
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