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:                       ***                                         HEART

        Don't Blame The Beasts                  For The Beast You Became 
       They're As Blood Sensitive             As You Were Borne Frightened.
     That Sticky Love Thicknessness          Don't   Waste   Another    Drop
     Love Is Redemption -------------          ------------ For Every Violation. 
                                                WORD.
      Don't  Blame  The  Fisherman              It's  His   Catch To     Catch
        You're More Of A             Play  Mate      Than     Food    Anyway. 
          As A Real Treat:                YOU         Scarrr  What You Meat...
            (To Be Fair,       'Til Your Blood Is No        Thicker Than Air.)
               Livingkind To Humankindness;    Possibly Afterthought,
                 All Laws Are Laws That Should Never Gain Mention;
                    Intentionally  Inherent   To  Get  Your  Attention
                       To Savor And Save In A Chosen Selection  
                                A Perfection In Love's Grand 
                                       So  LOVE  Worthy!
                                        And  Ominous
                                            Reflect
                                             -ion
                                                .

-Gray Squirrel

05-27-2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Schlesinger-Fleming Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 1:27 PM
Hello, congratulations on your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage. Enjoyed your creative expression very much. Lovely write. God Bless!
Squirrel Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Lol... thank you!
Gifford Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 1:41 AM
Hello Gray, this is an excellent piece, beautifully written. Wishing you a great weekend, fellow poet.
Squirrel Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Zyrool...
Lowe Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 6:30 PM
Love the allegorical message, and its unique poetic canvassing style: MAGNIFICENT! Keep squirreling, Gary. Thanks for the share. One. Peace and Love.
Squirrel Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 9:28 AM
Thanks, Millard!
Hind Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:51 PM
Very uplifting, it touched me intimately- a definite fav
Squirrel Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Thanks!
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