Heartsick

giddy atmosphere the platinum boy had,
ocean drained eyes
esoteric depth 

concealing grins the platinum boy had,
pure drunk man 
shallow in relationships 

august grieve the platinum boy had,
wailing brought the world to its brim 
such doleful sight, crystal to folks is 
 
sheer smile the platinum boy had,
emotions overflow trigged by lust
loathed the body of his own self
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