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Hearts swayed in the dark

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He plays me like his violin puts me through the gamut of emotions. Each note is plucked just right to harmonize with jasmin shades of bloom. The breeze hums its chant of loneliness for anyone willing to listen. It's an open invitation to every lonesome soul. A heartbeat and its echo resonates, bathing in a mellow atmosphere of honey drippings in the dark of night where broken hearts will soon gather and try to mend under a sullen moon. AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Date: 6/5/2025 7:58:00 PM
This is stirring, Line. Bursting with emotions and echoes thereof. A big FAVE for me.
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