Heart's Parts

heart's places
blessing and cursing
heart's nature

characteremotionsfeelingsgrowing uphaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

October 7, 2025 at 9:34 PM

The two sides to the heart. Congratulations on the win, Hilo

William Kelii Kekaula

October 8, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, most appreciated. Aloha.

Paula Goldsmith

October 7, 2025 at 1:30 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Heart's Parts" write. Great Picture Here... Have a Blessed day writing away.........

William Kelii Kekaula

October 7, 2025 at 2:03 PM

I'm grateful for your views of kindness, my friend. Aloha.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

October 7, 2025 at 12:34 PM

Aloha dear friend :-) Congratulations on your nice win.

William Kelii Kekaula

October 7, 2025 at 1:03 PM

Thank you, my friend. Aloha.

Charles Messina

October 7, 2025 at 4:50 AM

Aloha Hilo, Lovely miniku, didn't exactly see striking imagery here, which was a note in my contest, nicely written nonetheless! Congrats on your placement!

William Kelii Kekaula

October 7, 2025 at 10:03 AM

Better luck next time, eh. All is good, my friend. Aloha