Steven Mossburg Poet Triolet

Hearts of Hope

The rocket soared beyond earth's hold
It left behind our glowing eyes
It stabbed the skies with hope so bold
Our hearts, our dreams, it will enfold
And take them high through crystal skies
The rocket soared beyond earth's hold
It left behind our glowing eyes



for Andrea Dietrich's contest  "Movie Triolet"    movie - "October Sky"  (last scene)

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 7, 2010 at 11:55 AM Thanks for dropping by my triolet Steven :) really appreciate your comments and I love that Sicilian haha & how he always said "inconceivable!!" haha ;) have you read the novel? it's awesome as well! One of my all-time favorites actually :) enjoy your Sunday :) -- nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown August 6, 2010 at 11:46 AM Congratulations Steven on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Movie Scene Triolet". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 5, 2010 at 7:50 PM Appreciate your wonderful comments Steven.. poetry is our gift from God to share with each other and all who read..luv..

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2010 at 3:17 PM I liked how you incorporated some imagery in to this very nicely crafted triolet. Congrats for your place in my contest! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 5, 2010 at 8:08 AM Congrats Steven on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. with this wonderful write from an awesome movie.. enjoy your top spot..with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 4, 2010 at 1:31 AM Very interesting Steven, Haven't seen this movie but your triolet sure intrigued me-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)

Constance La France July 30, 2010 at 7:37 PM Thanks for the comment on my poem~ I never say this movie but I think I should ~ best of luck in the contest~~

Doris Culverhouse July 30, 2010 at 5:46 PM enjoyed sounds like a winner to me!

Francine Roberts July 30, 2010 at 2:45 PM very pretty

C.C Bloomsfield July 30, 2010 at 2:44 PM Great entry for the contest,much enjoyed!Celene!