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" HEART IN LOVE " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Hearts In Love

Held her in his arms

Anxiously their first kiss shared 

Immortality!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
       04 June 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:01 PM
Oh the beautiful romance of it, dear Demetrios. A captivating haiku! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Wanter Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Profound! I think your garden is more than a garden.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Oh, yes! It is a residence of... beauty and quietness! Thank you my friend for visiting and commenting!
Warrior Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Your verses are immortal my young sir...love and light my friend...^WW^
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Thank you for the young! haha! Well, age has nothing to do if love resides in the heart. Thank you so much for your kind comment my friend WW!
Michael Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 5:45 AM
Mr. Romantic absolutely fantastic haiku write...All the best D
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 5:55 AM
It takes one to know one , they say! haha! Thank you my dear friend, Arturo. So kind of you to comment!
Cunningham Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 3:14 AM
The spark that fused their love, thus becoming one. Lovely romantic verse Demetrios. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 3:20 AM
Appreciate your visit and pertinent comment my dear friend, Tom. God bless you!
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 1:24 AM
Romantic and beautiful, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 2:56 AM
Happy you liked it my dearest, Anne-Lise. Hugs xxx Thank you!
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