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Heart's Harp

Tiny heart soars high in the sky It raises above, ripping the dark clouds And talks for hours __ to the Mage of Night At times, it dives down deep into the blue water And swims on the back of a butterfly fish Sometimes rests in a fluffy coral reef__ It walks like a king In the vast empire of my Mind Surely, it is the sun of this perfect floral garden Every now and then, it gets wet By the glum autumn rains When it walks on the barren lands But, it gets up, open its wings Flies again above the winds Or slide down with a crunchy crimson leave To sleep on a noisy pile of sacked leaves Little Heart's harp is strange Little heart wants everything Though, it is enslaved Inside a in ribs-cage ??_______________________?? Note: Mage of night means Moon (the magician) (2nd March,2021) (For Heart Harps poetry contest)

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Date: 4/29/2021 11:05:00 AM
Hello Richard, I love this poem. I like the first verse. I also like the whole poem. This will be my fav. Good luck in the contest. Blessings my friend. Enjoy your day.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/30/2021 10:38:00 AM
Hello Richard, you are welcome Stay safe my friend. Blessings. Darlene
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:59:00 PM
Hi, Darlene, Thank you for the kind wishes. Stay blessed
Date: 4/29/2021 11:01:00 AM
Hello Richard, I love this poem I like the dirst5 verse. I like the whole poem. This will be my fav. I hope it wins the contest. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 4/26/2021 11:11:00 AM
I expect this to do well. It has a whimsical feel. I also read your first poem. You are a talented poet. Blessings Richard.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:57:00 PM
Cool.. Thank you for going all the way down and reading my first poem as well. I really appreciate that. I'm still in the learning stage... Thank you!
Date: 4/12/2021 2:08:00 PM
this is so imaginative. Keep up with your creative poetry, Paghunda.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 4/6/2021 3:13:00 PM
Always love your poetry
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:55:00 PM
Didn't know that... Thank you
Date: 4/1/2021 7:33:00 AM
Inspirational and enchanting writing, dearest Baghunda!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:55:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios
Date: 3/14/2021 8:30:00 AM
Dear Paghunda, I am enchanted with the magical imagery of this ardent little heart. A breathtaking poem of a heart's desires with reality's twist in the end. Beautiful poetry that is deeply felt by this avid reader. Warmest wishes, my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:54:00 PM
Aw, thank you so much for the lovely comment... I am glad you liked this Harps of the Heart... Thank you Susan
Date: 3/13/2021 1:45:00 AM
- Lovely written, Panghunda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Annie
Date: 3/3/2021 6:46:00 PM
Paghunda, Such a devoted harp, and interesting voyage of the heart. -Richard
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:52:00 PM
Indeed... I love my little heart ;)
Date: 3/3/2021 12:03:00 PM
Wow, unique my friend such gorgeous imagery and such wonderful poetic phrases, I absolutely love this write, did you get your results yet, thinking of you! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:51:00 PM
Hey Jennifer, how are things at your end? I actually forgot the result. Let me check it
Date: 3/3/2021 1:09:00 AM
Love the imagery here, enjoyed the read.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Harry
Date: 3/2/2021 4:02:00 PM
Mesmerizing write, Paghunda:-) Thoroughly enjoyed. Good luck in the contest!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 4/29/2021 12:49:00 PM
Thanks Edward