hearts door

pain strives to firmly grasp our heart's door so it opens to reveal us
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Crandall Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 7:46 PM
Interesting how pain can reveal us. Hope you're doing well!
George Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 8:16 PM
It is pain that opens our heart to reveal who we truly are. Great monoku, dear Cay Cay
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 4:13 AM
The pain is where the light enters, and I have quoted this one from Rumi. I wonder if that is what you were giving us for a contest? If so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 5:49 PM
Interesting…wow
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 4:52 PM
a wise monoku...best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara
Hind Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 2:59 PM
Deep, deep, yes, yes!! Very profound, I agree.
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 12:24 PM
that is a profound one. Good job, Caycay. A short Soupie
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