Hearts Carved On a Tree

The sun is out
  The sky is blue
Hearts carved on a tree
  Spell Me and You

We stroll by the water
  Forget our cares
Summer's here now
  To enjoy the fresh air

Smell the red peonies
  Gorgeous pods on a stem
Pick a few, don't deny
  The table its diadem

Scoop up some stones
  Choose one smooth and flat
Skip it across the lake
  and marvel at that...

As the sun works its way
  Into the last gentle wave
The day's etched in memories
  ~ For Eternity to save

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Date: 10/19/2020 6:40:00 PM
Such life to this poem ~ lovely.
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Date: 6/8/2020 11:08:00 AM
A heartwarming poem Gershon, gentle, loving and creative - love it. Blessings, Jennifesr.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, Jennifer. Can't ask for more encouragement than you've given to me today for this poem. Appreciated. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 6/8/2020 10:35:00 AM
Gershon, This is a wonderful excursion indeed. Your poems paint a scene as well any Norman Rockwell dreamed. -Richard
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Date: 8/2/2020 9:01:00 AM
This is where it was placed, a comment for your poem. You discovered the poem in a comment. You should post it. -Richard
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2020 11:03:00 AM
Richard, I think that you should post/publish this comment as a poem! E.g., "Special poems paint a scene as well as any Norman Rockwell dream." That's a 17-syllable monoku, by the way. Take it; it's yours, by rights!! Thank you so much! :) Gershon
Date: 6/8/2020 6:03:00 AM
An eternal friendship love; nothing better!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2020 9:58:00 AM
Eternity is just that... Thanks, Caren! :) gw
Date: 6/8/2020 2:58:00 AM
Those kind of memories stay with you forever, lovely imagery. Tom
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement, Tom. Always a pleasure to read your comments and see your avatar! Happy Monday! ~ Gershon
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