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Hearts and Minds

On this world where I will to die, the sun will set and rise, it’s no surprise, that rivers will, continue to flow and hearts and minds, of all the creatures there, will seek those pleasures, all as sought before. In my mind I see the creatures die, the moon will wax and wane, and forests full and lush will come and go, more creatures smarter still, with hearts and minds begin to dream and more, knowing nothing of the world, that came before. Outside this world I call my mindful eye, a sun and moon will rise and shine, and lakes with life as lavish, I pass by, more creatures still are plentiful and free, with hearts and minds that dream, of pleasures to unfold and makers of a world, as yet untold!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 7:12:00 PM
very well penned and everything continues onward and goes on around your words flow like the old saying about the circle of life,,,,Well written and Thank you for reading and leaving your comment behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 2/18/2010 3:46:00 AM
I had to reread, it is a blessing to me again today.
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Date: 2/16/2010 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful...simply beautiful, David! Goes to my favs. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:13:00 PM
Wonderful poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:02:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, keep sharing.
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