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Heartless

heartless small and mean dissecting a heart peer into it closely unfurl its soft red petals poke and prod with promises, then betrayals it will last just long enough. until you are bored.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/1/2017 2:31:00 PM
lol ... the bored word put your write on a different level ... uhm ... ok ... say you give a camel enough for a mile and he has to walk two ... what water hole must the camel seek to fall beyond thirst ... hmm ...
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Pipping Stars
Date: 9/1/2017 4:07:00 PM
camels drink p's i think we will be ok ...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/1/2017 3:16:00 PM
Thank you Timothy. If I were the camel I would tell me to stuff it and go lay down in the shade. I am not good at seeing the obvious. You got me.

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