Holly Bohto Poet Free verse

Heartfelt Deceit

shivering inside 
really deceiving
           really shivering inside
     sweating inside 
really regretting
           really sweating inside
     tangled inside 
really mangled
            really tangled inside     
     frigid inside 
really rigid 
            really frigid inside
     dying inside 
really crying
            really dying inside

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Chris Green March 24, 2017 at 6:20 AM This reeks of torment and inner pain my friend. Sad but nicely written Holly Bohto March 24, 2017 at 8:00 AM Ha ha. It's experimenting with word placement and about how a pure heart is pained when deception slips in.