Get Your Premium Membership

Heartfelt Deceit

shivering inside really deceiving really shivering inside sweating inside really regretting really sweating inside tangled inside really mangled really tangled inside frigid inside really rigid really frigid inside dying inside really crying really dying inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/24/2017 6:20:00 AM
This reeks of torment and inner pain my friend. Sad but nicely written
Login to Reply
Bohto Avatar
Holly Bohto
Date: 3/24/2017 8:00:00 AM
Ha ha. It's experimenting with word placement and about how a pure heart is pained when deception slips in.

Book: Shattered Sighs