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Heartbroken I Stand Here So Strong

Once, when you were about to die, you said: “No tears! The men don’t cry if things heartbrokenly went wrong”. Heartbroken I stand here so strong. Oh, I did not let a tear fall when the uncaring death took all that I held dearest all along. Heartbroken I stand here so strong. No one was crying when I died. Please, sweep me out, the blissful tide of void I waited for so long! Heartbroken I stand here so strong. No tears! Instead of nothingness, nothing has changed: a noise, a mess before locked gates stormed by a throng. Heartbroken I stand here so strong. 12.07.2019 Writing Challenge 1, July 2019 - Repeating Refrain Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart

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Date: 7/19/2019 9:56:00 AM
Kurt, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge with this emotional write, well done !
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Date: 7/16/2019 8:31:00 PM
Kurt congrats on placing in the contest!;)
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Date: 7/14/2019 9:25:00 AM
I think you met this challenge, in fact this piece transcends the contest. Well expressed!
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Date: 7/13/2019 11:09:00 AM
Poignantly beautiful poem! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/12/2019 4:04:00 PM
My dear friend, this is such a strong and beautifully crafted example of inspiring verse! Good luck in the contest with this superb piece.. A fav,, a true gem too.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/13/2019 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, dear Robert. Sharp spears await)

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