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Heartbroken

quadruple bypass
urgent surgery cancelled ~
a ticking time bomb

healthsenryu

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/19/2023 5:04:00 AM

Lol I thought after Brexit there were not supposed to be any more hiccups from the British NHS :) Joking apart, cancelling urgent ops is a serious predicament. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 2:27:00 PM

Brexit and Covid together Paul and of course being on our little island people need to fly to the UK for this type of surgery:-( hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 6/18/2023 4:10:00 AM

oh, scary one here - yes, I feel for those whose surgery has been cancelled

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Jack yeah so many ops are being cancelled or delayed:-) hugs Jan xx

Paige Hind

Date: 6/14/2023 2:50:00 PM

I really wish you the best. The poem was intense.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Paige, I do write the occasional serious poem but as you know humour is more my style:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 6/14/2023 11:30:00 AM

Ooh la la! This poem stops the heart! Well done. xomo

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 2:48:00 AM

Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/13/2023 5:22:00 AM

Yikes! Scary…we all hope to get medical attention when needed and as soon as possible.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 2:48:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 6/12/2023 7:42:00 PM

So sorry for your friend Jan. We have to have hope. Wishing her a speedy recovery...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2023 2:47:00 AM

Thanks Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/12/2023 12:10:00 PM

I pray this was Not you and just a good write. Have a blessed day...............

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2023 12:14:00 PM

No thankfully its not about me but I do have a friend who had a heart attack and one side is blocked the other side isn't working - just waiting to find out what can be done. Hugs jan xx SO good to see you back Paula xx

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