Heartbroken

Hit her daily won't solve your problems.
Escape her noisy as you are short-tempered,
All will work good for you.
Rightly, you will appreciate my advice later.
Troublemaker can turn to be a peacemaker,
Being good to each other is a good process.
Right and left hands always lift up heavy things
Observably, reject wrangle and like peace 
Kindliness , happiness , joyce, love. 
Expecting to see some smile on her face soon; 
No one will call you harrasser again in the future. 

February 26/2023
Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France. 
Chosen theme: HEARTBROKEN

... Second 
    Win in the 
    Contest...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Alfonso, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Thank you so much
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. It is wrong to hit another person or animal. Have a blessed day.............
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:24 PM
Thanks so much You are welcome
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 10:35 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Thank you so much , You are welcome
Goldsmith Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 12:54 PM
The word "HEARTBROKEN" is not part of love. True love does not leave one "HEARTBROKEN." Have a wonderful/blessed day.........................
Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Man hit her daily... Her HEART BROKEN... Man must reject Wrangled " querrel" And like " Peace, happiness, joyce, kindness, love. We will see her smile due to HEALING. Thank so much for visiting my page , and comment. Some men must stop to abuse women.
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