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Heartbroken

Hit her daily won't solve your problems. Escape her noisy as you are short-tempered, All will work good for you. Rightly, you will appreciate my advice later. Troublemaker can turn to be a peacemaker, Being good to each other is a good process. Right and left hands always lift up heavy things Observably, reject wrangle and like peace Kindliness , happiness , joyce, love. Expecting to see some smile on her face soon; No one will call you harrasser again in the future. February 26/2023 Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France. Chosen theme: HEARTBROKEN ... Second Win in the Contest...

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Date: 3/2/2023 1:22:00 AM
Alfonso, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - H Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
Thank you so much
Date: 2/28/2023 1:39:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. It is wrong to hit another person or animal. Have a blessed day.............
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Thanks so much You are welcome
Date: 2/28/2023 10:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Thank you so much , You are welcome
Date: 2/27/2023 12:54:00 PM
The word "HEARTBROKEN" is not part of love. True love does not leave one "HEARTBROKEN." Have a wonderful/blessed day.........................
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Man hit her daily... Her HEART BROKEN... Man must reject Wrangled " querrel" And like " Peace, happiness, joyce, kindness, love. We will see her smile due to HEALING. Thank so much for visiting my page , and comment. Some men must stop to abuse women.

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