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The One That Got Away

Heartbroken

Be mine, my love for eternity, 
      I perfectly thought with certainty. 

   I was only thirteen and in dreams  
      or so it seemed, my mind sunny gleams.

   He would saunter the school halls with friends;
      I would watch past weakness sense extends.

   I couldn't wane his blue eyes dreams of love, 
      my promise amid bright stars above. 

   I at last got his eyes attention, 
      but to late a look or a mention. 

   Parents decided to move across,
      the country, my heartbroken and loss.

   I saw him once again years later,
      a wife and children he did cater

   He was too busy, he didn't see me,
      so ashamed I hid behind a tree. 

   Seeing him once more, laughter and tears
      brought  lost memories of those last years.

7/6/2020

2.  Heartbroken

''H'' Contest, New Or Old Poems Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write about young love. Life moves in many different ways. Memories both good and bad stay with us. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:43 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your wonderful poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
Shaw Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 4:01 PM
It's amazing just how we hold someone special in our hearts for years, but; on a funnier note, are you checking the trees out behind you to see who is peeping at you with the same reminiscing heart . . . : )
Roper Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 8:58 PM
awe ;)
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 7:12 PM
So heartbreaking. I am sure all of us have endured this, at least once and probably more than once. Good job and congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 8:08 AM
Very touching and movingly nostalgic, Eve. Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 9:07 PM
Wonderful words, my friend. God bless you with many more enchanting writes.
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 2:48 PM
Such a lovely account of young love and nostalgia in your couplet Eve. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
Watt Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Ah, the memories of shattered dreams we carry with us to the grave. This was so tender, and easy to relate to, Eve. Congrats, and God bless you ~ John
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Sweet memories of youth, Eve. Congrats! Blessings, Rhonda xx
One Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 9:22 AM
You were so young.. sometimes we will always wonder what would have been.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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