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Heartbreak Sonnet

Heartbreak is like shattered glass They say they are here forever Yet while you believed their butt Forever is a lie, they actually mean never Planning a future, gets your hopes up Thinking time would change his mind If it’s meant to be, it will fill your cup Little did you know he would find Someone new better than you’re The pain he caused he don’t care You feel like you caused this move Arguing comes from dare This broken heart shall heal One day someone will steal

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Date: 2/7/2023 12:33:00 PM
Intuitive but not too deep or too long for the reader to opt out. Hope you stay to enjoy what the soup has to offer. Hope showed through in this piece without diminishing the hurt we can cause each other. You will find through feedback that poets can inspire more than you think. Probably because most emotion in poems is genuine and less contrived than what we get from other mediums as they reflect real passion. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 1/17/2023 8:48:00 PM
broken heart never gets the power of healing if there comes not the love ! nice to read
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Date: 1/14/2023 4:44:00 AM
Nicely written, Alexis, I can feel the emotion in this piece. Welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Alexis Gonzales
Date: 1/14/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much! I had to change a word that is in my original copy of this piece because I can’t have cuss words on this website. But the fact I had so many views and I just posted this yesterday makes me excited

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