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heartbreak hotel

Heartbreak Hotel by JG Those kind, heartfelt words he used... His soft touch flowing through your hair. That perfect kiss to seal a magical night, His charming humor calming your mind. An unforgettable smile that soothed your soul, And the sound of that cherished L word beneath the stars. But days pass Without his sweet voice in your ear. Your skin forgets his warming touch. Her heart stops—eyes blinded. Across the room, His hands now move through another’s hair. The same sweet lines Persuading her home with him. A single tear falls down her cheek. Another room in the Heartbreak Hotel.

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Date: 6/13/2025 9:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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