Heartbreak

The non-exsistant nature of things most desired fuels a heart
already marred with disdain and disfugured with impropreity.
The heart turns inward wrapping itself into a bleeding barbed wire prison.
For that pain reveals disturbing forgetfulness.
As the red current laughs wickedly, 
choking out honesty in tiny pin pricks no longer reversable.
The aching silence is filled with beautiful memories,
that cut small and shallow like razor blades.
Relentless with their torment until only numbness is left.
Curled up, screaming from the outside in,
but smiling to the world meaninglessly.
Keeping the secret a secret,
a sad hidden treasure for someone to unlock.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/24/2014 2:13:00 PM
....Hello, Sweet Beautiful Cheri ~ I Want To Say Thank You For Your Kind Visit Although Regretful To Find That My Comment Was Removed From This Blue Sea Gray Skies Echoing Mirrors, Exceptional Verse ? It Must Have Been Some Type In Collateral Which Occurred And I Do Apologize ~ There Isn't In Truth We Would Imagine Anything More Priceless Amid This Life Then, Another's `Heart Of Hearts`....Growing Up The Most Adverse These Conditions ? An Age With Stacked Seasons As Reason's, Decks ~ My Love, Always, John
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Cheri Burtovoy
Date: 2/2/2014 6:43:00 PM
I really appreciate you stopping by again to leave another exquisite comment. Thank you again.
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Johnny Rhinem
Date: 1/24/2014 2:37:00 PM
............So I know parts of this poem Very well. just getting past another day; just as the majority about the rest of this world........I have no dreams and I never have. We have to walk in our own life's shoes..........
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