Heartbeats

Three words kissed my ears- my heart somersaulting as his heartbeats revert. 27.2.2021 Monoku.

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Date: 3/21/2021 1:05:00 AM

Ah, so tenderly romantic. Monoku is not easy, yet, here it is, and well penned

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/21/2021 3:02:00 AM

Thank you Caren....much love :)

Date: 3/6/2021 9:13:00 PM

Such a fine submission. A joy to read more than once. Congratulations. All the best, Brian

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/6/2021 10:35:00 PM

Thanks Brian....I am glad you enjoyed it :)

Date: 3/6/2021 1:35:00 AM

This is such a lovely entry Carol.. Congrats on your win.. ~ Ani

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/6/2021 2:09:00 AM

Thank you dear Ani....I loved your one too...much love :)

Date: 3/4/2021 6:24:00 AM

Hi Carol, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/4/2021 5:12:00 PM

Thanks dear Alexis...much love :)

Date: 3/4/2021 3:24:00 AM

- Lovely, Carol ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/4/2021 5:12:00 PM

Thanks dear Anne-Lise...much love :)