Heartbeats

Three words kissed my ears- my heart somersaulting 
as his heartbeats revert.

27.2.2021
Monoku.

romantic lovemonoku

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Caren Krutsinger

March 21, 2021 at 1:05 AM

Ah, so tenderly romantic. Monoku is not easy, yet, here it is, and well penned

Carol Mitra

March 21, 2021 at 3:02 AM

Thank you Caren....much love :)

Brian Sambourne

March 6, 2021 at 9:13 PM

Such a fine submission. A joy to read more than once. Congratulations. All the best, Brian

Carol Mitra

March 6, 2021 at 10:35 PM

Thanks Brian....I am glad you enjoyed it :)

Anitha Jayasankar

March 6, 2021 at 1:35 AM

This is such a lovely entry Carol.. Congrats on your win.. ~ Ani

Carol Mitra

March 6, 2021 at 2:09 AM

Thank you dear Ani....I loved your one too...much love :)

Alexis Y.

March 4, 2021 at 6:24 AM

Hi Carol, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Carol Mitra

March 4, 2021 at 5:12 PM

Thanks dear Alexis...much love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 4, 2021 at 3:24 AM

- Lovely, Carol ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carol Mitra

March 4, 2021 at 5:12 PM

Thanks dear Anne-Lise...much love :)

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