Heartbeat Solitude

Heartbeat solitude It is these silent moments prior to the sunrise awakening my part of the world, when dew is still wet on the lawn, not a peep or a chirp or a lingering echo is heard, morning winds keep their whispers to themselves and darkness creates the final quiet serenity before the hustle and bustle of the day begins, that I enjoy most For, it is in this solitude that the only sound I hear is that of my heart, beating solely for you
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December 7, 2016 at 9:17 AM
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December 7, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Sigh..Extremely beautiful...Iove my own solitude. Defnitely peaceful and when Im most inspired.A 7
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December 7, 2016 at 10:01 AM
And we all smile my friend when you are inspired. May you find much solitude in your days ahead. Thank you for sharing in mine.
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December 6, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Beautiful, Chris! I love early morning! It is a gift!
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December 6, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Thank you so very much Kim. It sure is.
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December 6, 2016 at 10:30 AM
I agree...I like getting up before everyone and just enjoy the silence and caffeine.
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December 6, 2016 at 10:32 AM
It is the best time of the day to me. Thanks so much Tim. I appreciate your nice comment.
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December 6, 2016 at 8:42 AM
WoW! Chris, I really enjoyed this piece from start to finish. Your title alone had my full attention. As I started to read I wasn't disappointed. The imagery was lovely. and liked how you caused the state of solitude to be sooo romantic. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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December 6, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Alexis, your comments always bring the biggest smile to my face. I truly do appreciate you my friend.
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December 6, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Very romantic, Chris. I do love me some early morning solitude:)
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December 6, 2016 at 10:30 AM
It is nice, isn't it Daniel? Thanks so very much my friend.
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December 6, 2016 at 7:27 AM
This is such a nice way to start the day. I do also agree with Victor. A great romantic! Beautiful writing this morning :)
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December 6, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi. I am happy you enjoyed this one this morning. Keep smiling my friend.
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December 6, 2016 at 6:13 AM
Solitude can make us hyper aware and be comforting in the same breath, such an eloquent way to start the day Chris. 7+
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December 6, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Thanks so very much Paloma. You are right, thankfully the quiet times for me allow me to reflect on beautiful things...usually. :)
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