Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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''Heartbeat'' of Our Existence

 
"Some painters transform the sun into a yellow spot;
Others transform a yellow spot into the sun."

                                 _Pablo Picasso 


                          Yes, the sun is a star,
            heartbeat of the solar orbits;
the scientific description bizarre,
the reason for all the lush green forests.
                           Without this star-no light,
it would be just dark all the time like night;
nothing- there would be no life to delight,
      reason for our night and day;
            the reason that our seasons sway,
                        reason for a bouquet.
Nothing is more magical than a blue sky clear,
             I love sun when hanging enormous;
      love auroras made from particle flight,
and skies when the sun and clouds do a ballet.
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March 17, 2020


Poetry/Rhyme/''Heartbeat'' of Our Existence
Copyright Protected, ID 20-1237-040-03
All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France


Written for the contest, A Star's Heartbeat Beat
sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cooke

Third Place

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Matt Coffelt March 25, 2020 at 3:36 AM I honestly love the way you have formed your words with tranquility and delight into a picturesque scene in my mind as I read it! I really enjoy your work as I feel I can relate to the styles of your choice. This is one of my favs I just threw a few new ones up and I’m always happy to have you take a peek if you have time. I’m still digging the sorrow from bad girlfriends yet in my work?? Thanks and Enjoy your day Matt Constance La France March 25, 2020 at 1:49 PM Matt, thanks for visiting and for the FAV, I use all my sorrow in my poetry, it is a sort of release, I will for sure look up some of your poems _Constance

Beata Agustin March 23, 2020 at 3:18 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this "sun-illumined" scientific fact in your poetic style. God bless you. Constance La France March 23, 2020 at 2:25 PM Beata, thanks for visiting my humble poem and for the congrats _Constance

John Watt March 22, 2020 at 10:37 PM Constance, so happy to see you win with this lovely love song to the sun! "When the sun and clouds do a ballet" Life and light from our very own daystar. Beautiful words from a wonderful poet. Blessings to you ~ John Constance La France March 23, 2020 at 2:26 PM John, I am pleased with the win too, oh I liked that line of mine too, and thanks for the compliment _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong March 22, 2020 at 7:04 PM You did your homework and it paid off big time Constance. I love teaching my grandchildren the differences of bodies of light in the cosmos. Today we spoke of starfish and how they have no brain and an eyes at the tip of their arms. I will read this wonderful poem of yours to them. Congratulations on your spectacular podium win! I am faving this solar gem! xxoo Constance La France March 23, 2020 at 2:31 PM Connie, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem, yes, I did a lot of research for this and learned lots about the sun, too much to put in this poem of course, but one disturbing fact(don't tell the kids) is that in about 5 billion years the sun will expand because it has run out of fuel and swallow the earth and all the planets we orbit with_ Constance

Panagiota Romios March 22, 2020 at 2:11 PM Excellent, wowser. Congratuations, Panagiota xx Constance La France March 23, 2020 at 2:33 PM Panagiota, thanks for the congratulations and the excellent _Constance

Sam Kauffman March 22, 2020 at 1:38 PM Constance, such a lovely poem with so many wise perceptions about the importance of our sun. Congratulations on your win! Constance La France March 23, 2020 at 2:33 PM Sam, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Caren Krutsinger March 17, 2020 at 3:14 PM This sounds like a star's heartbeat and their soul too. Constance La France March 18, 2020 at 8:20 AM Caren, thanks for visiting, I did not know but found out in my research that in 5 billion years from now the sun will run out of fuel, expand and consume earth and all the planets in our solar system, I found that horrifying _Constance