Heartbeat

Heartbeat

I'm holding my breath.
Catching what's left.
Giving you the rest.
Looking at you leaves me breathless.

I'm holding my own
Before my heart is overthrown.
Wishing there was a chance.
Remembering what makes a man.
I'm a mess
when your presence leaves me breathless.

Do you know how that feels?
Does it matter to you?
Can you hear the heartbeat I let you steal?

I'm holding my breath.
Catching what's left.
Giving you the rest.
Looking at you leaves me breathless.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 22, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Love the poem. I'm a writer of historical mythology. I would like to include your poem in a short story. Would I be able to?
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May 22, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Thank you. I appreciate the offer but I'm going to decline.
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May 19, 2014 at 4:31 PM
WOW, you have such a pen, I love it, the breathtaking poem. Enjoyed stopping by:) Love ~SKAT~
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May 19, 2014 at 8:41 PM
:) thank you so much! I enjoyed writing it. It's one of my best. ~Princess~
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May 19, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Just Like Romeo & Juliet's, Boy Meets Girl! Swirls In Twirls Her Fiery Curls His Burning Heart, They'll Never Part. .Gazing Unto The Glass There Is No Past Yet Only Paths...A Torch Twas Lit Love's Cavern Walls And Etched This Stone Of Time Shall Fall ? Whence Birth Be Borne These Crimson Stalls....An Infant Clings Her Princess Dreams While All He Knows This Art, Is She. .Your Poem Exceeds Mere Beauty: Tis Quite Lovely....Love, Jeremy *
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May 19, 2014 at 2:32 PM
Thank you, dear :) Tis very sweet of you..
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May 19, 2014 at 2:53 AM
Hey, I love this--and your avatar. I used to work for Disney, so it figures. Nicely done :)
Herring Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Hey, I'm so glad you love it! Haha, that really is the coolest job.. Thank you so much :)
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May 18, 2014 at 11:34 PM
Hear beating well.
Herring Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 11:39 PM
Lol! Thanks, Muhamma. :)
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