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Heartbeat

Morning dew dripping from my eyelids doors banging at the center of my heart as the symphony gets ready to start. the flute begins with a champion song while the listless crowd jeers merrily along. brass, rhythm and base my lips tremble with sadness, and I could not escape this emptiness. The sound increased, but the pain did not cease. Tump thump lub-dub ba- bum chanting sounds from the congo drums reduced me to crumbs. The violin ushers in, and the vibrating trumpet sound begins The chords get louder and louder exploding emotions in the air, leaving me cold, empty and bare. The manipulative trombone echoes through my ears, and the deceiving guitar tune appears, in one second everything was said and I scrambled hopelessly to my bed. It rips up my innate passion while they look upon me without compassion. I waited for an answer but he was entwined with the belly dancer. The symphony increase, every beat exposed the daunting rhythm to my piercing soul. they appear one by one, raging without control Tubo, trombone, French horn and bassoon harps ,tiako and bamboo flutes made their speechless debut, heartbeat telling me the truth. ©2013 Christine Phillips

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Date: 8/27/2013 6:50:00 AM
What imagery of what I'm guessing is a tragic score. Very nice work.
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Date: 5/1/2013 11:29:00 PM
I am sorry to have erased by mistake my comment! This is a well written epitaph of a wonderer! Very powerful poem! Thank you!
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Date: 5/1/2013 7:14:00 PM
What can I say that hasn't been said... I relate to the wonderfull written and heartfelt poem. Exquisite use of the instruments and combining them with feelings... they were spot on !!!
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Date: 4/27/2013 12:42:00 PM
sooooooo nice poem with great poetic images I hope you the best
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Date: 4/26/2013 7:49:00 PM
immersed in the musical combo, and swayed by the rythymical beat, soul an body near parting, with indescribable heat...
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Date: 4/26/2013 10:33:00 AM
A lovely way to tell your feelings through the "music" in your heart, Christine - One very well written poem. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Christine Phillips
Date: 4/26/2013 10:35:00 AM
Thank you Anne

Book: Shattered Sighs