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Heartbeat

Like a ticking clock~ a drum’s rhythm in darkness... wings f l u t t e r i n g within a sky inside me.

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:10:00 AM

Dear Maclawrence, this is so beautiful, one that i wish i had written, your presentation as well as how youv described heartbeat in such a creative manner is beyond impressive! I especially love "wings fluttering within a sky inside me" how vast and deep your heart is youv expressed very well! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your top win: sending you light

Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/8/2025 4:58:00 AM

Thanks for hosting such a creative contest that allows the participants to freely pen their creativity. And more importantly thanks for giving this poem the accolades and the recognition.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your deep micro poem, Heartbeat :) - hugs

Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 5/8/2025 1:54:00 AM

Thanks a million, Anne-Lise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2025 4:32:00 PM

Oh wow. Stunning work. A fave

Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 4/30/2025 12:09:00 AM

Thanks so much especially for making it one of your faves, I so much appreciate it.