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Heartbeat

Rhythmic procession as to a band I'm sure it's in succession grand I can't feel it but I'm sure it gains I notice it pulsating in our veins stifled as it may seem to you still you perceive this is true I'm glad you do for I'm in bondage as a prisoner would live with that knowledge when I'm not sure that I'm en-route slow and steady you figured me out deep inside I understand you also you recognize this and I respect that so it's wonderful to be aware of this feat and I'm glad we share the same heartbeat

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/24/2020 5:01:00 PM

A beautiful poem, Angie. That sweet sync is rare, my friend. Your romantic pen spills with tenderness. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/15/2020 4:08:00 PM

So beautiful, especially 'slow and steady you figured me out' and 'share the same heartbeat' - those are the quiet moments of love~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/16/2020 3:52:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle :)

Silent One

Date: 11/14/2020 8:24:00 AM

this is really sweet and romantic poem and it rhymes very well..

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/14/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One. I really appreciate it :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2020 10:01:00 PM

When two hearts beat as one, it part of paradise. Lovely poet. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/14/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Victor. You're right. It is a part of paradise when they both are in sync with each other :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 11/13/2020 8:32:00 PM

Romantic and beautiful... I Love it :)

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/13/2020 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, Akkina :)

Jcb Brul

Date: 11/13/2020 6:18:00 PM

Very romantic! The last two lines... it's wonderful to be aware of this feat and I'm glad we share the same heartbeat". so sweet!!

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/13/2020 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, JCB :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/13/2020 4:29:00 PM

A sweet coupling. Terrific ending.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/13/2020 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Caren :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2020 4:03:00 PM

Wonderfully in harmony of heartbeats--I liked the tenor of your write, Angela.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/13/2020 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/13/2020 3:47:00 PM

This is sweet...well put together with a little you in it...

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/13/2020 5:15:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2020 3:14:00 PM

This is lovely and expressive, Angela. It is wonderful when two people get to know each other so well that they can feel the chemistry between them...maybe even more than mutual attraction. ~ Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/13/2020 5:15:00 PM

Thank you, Paul :)