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Heartbeat

Rhythmic procession as to a band
I'm sure it's in succession grand
I can't feel it but I'm sure it gains
I notice it pulsating in our veins
stifled as it may seem to you
still you perceive this is true
I'm glad you do for I'm in bondage
as a prisoner would live with that knowledge
when I'm not sure that I'm en-route
slow and steady you figured me out
deep inside I understand you also
you recognize this and I respect that so
it's wonderful to be aware of this feat
and I'm glad we share the same heartbeat

Copyright © Angela Crabtree | Year Posted 2020

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Susan Ashley Date: 11/24/2020 5:01:00 PM A beautiful poem, Angie. That sweet sync is rare, my friend. Your romantic pen spills with tenderness. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 11/15/2020 4:08:00 PM So beautiful, especially 'slow and steady you figured me out' and 'share the same heartbeat' - those are the quiet moments of love~ Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/16/2020 3:52:00 PM Thank you, Michelle :)

Silent One Date: 11/14/2020 8:24:00 AM this is really sweet and romantic poem and it rhymes very well.. Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/14/2020 1:32:00 PM Thank you, Silent One. I really appreciate it :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/13/2020 10:01:00 PM When two hearts beat as one, it part of paradise. Lovely poet. ~~ Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/14/2020 1:32:00 PM Thank you, Victor. You're right. It is a part of paradise when they both are in sync with each other :)

Akkina Downing Date: 11/13/2020 8:32:00 PM Romantic and beautiful... I Love it :) Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/13/2020 9:22:00 PM Thank you, Akkina :)

JCB Brul Date: 11/13/2020 6:18:00 PM Very romantic! The last two lines... it's wonderful to be aware of this feat and I'm glad we share the same heartbeat". so sweet!! Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/13/2020 9:22:00 PM Thank you, JCB :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 11/13/2020 4:29:00 PM A sweet coupling. Terrific ending. Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/13/2020 5:16:00 PM Thank you, Caren :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/13/2020 4:03:00 PM Wonderfully in harmony of heartbeats--I liked the tenor of your write, Angela. Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/13/2020 5:16:00 PM Thank you, Vijay :)

Arturo Michael Date: 11/13/2020 3:47:00 PM This is sweet...well put together with a little you in it... Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/13/2020 5:15:00 PM Thank you, Arturo :)

Paul Callus Date: 11/13/2020 3:14:00 PM This is lovely and expressive, Angela. It is wonderful when two people get to know each other so well that they can feel the chemistry between them...maybe even more than mutual attraction. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Angela Crabtree Date: 11/13/2020 5:15:00 PM Thank you, Paul :)