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Heartaches Pass

Smiles express, tears depress friends dwindle, fools abound. Efforts fail, hearts confess eyes beckon lies confound. Rivers flow, souls shutter doubts linger, passions flame. Truths falter, words stutter fears fester, feelings blame. Bonds erode, friendships bind teardrops fall, dreams desist. Insults hurt, beliefs blind egos bruise, pains persist. Grapes ferment, needles sting gamers play, babies cry. Bellies ache, fenders ding eagles fly, soldiers, die. Failures fade, hopes renew spirits haunt, debts amass. Hugs assure, hurts construe sails unfurl, heartaches pass. (Quatrain) 2/5/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 2:33:00 PM
A most effective style , Emile. Most interesting juxtapositions.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are always welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/5/2015 4:43:00 PM
Ooooh, this is wonderful! The flow was beautiful and wording perfect. LOVE!
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:52:00 PM
Thanks Rachel, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/5/2015 3:58:00 PM
That was incredible! You speak truths, indeed.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/5/2015 4:55:00 PM
Once more I thank you, you've made my day. Emile.

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