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Heartache

................... Im choked up with nothing but tears Humiliated as you bring to light all my fears. I have so many thoughts but i cant seem to speak Desperation consumes my mind As i search hard to find some peace My scattered thoughts run wild Preventing me from any sleep So im stuck in thiss bubble ive created But a way out is all i seek Filled with nothing but self inflixted sorrow As i acknowledge your no longer in love with me Constant aching And no matter what i do I cant escape it

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Skat A

Date: 6/20/2016 11:40:00 PM

ATRASADA, Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words. Keep sharing and writing poetry. ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2013 6:55:00 PM

Hello Atrasada, , Wishing you the best when it comes to your writings. Congratulations on making the top, hottest, and best NEW poets on Poetry Soup list.... always & forever ~

Kaitlyn Smith

Date: 9/3/2013 2:26:00 PM

Hi, I was wondering if you could make a narrative poem with 3 stanzas. I have to make one for my English class and I struglgle with them and I'm in the 12th grade

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2013 11:18:00 AM

I know this feeling... sad it is to feel this way.. no way out... hope it's only a poem.. xox..LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2013 5:08:00 AM

.... oh...sooo sad.... good poem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)