Heartache

Elegantly the clouds dance
across the sky
The wind whistles
A tear falls from my eye
But it doesnt matter
Because my tears blend
in with the raindrops
that fall hard to the ground
The soil soaks them in
Making muddy pools
Which drown my feet
My heart aches for you...
The wind blows the trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 26, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Hello Kelli, A very sad write here but sometimes life gives us a journey that we must follow. Love and hurt seem to live together within us sometimes. Life is good honey and it will be better.....Promise As Always, Shar
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November 25, 2011 at 9:47 PM
Kelli, a very heart felt poem.. Sad at the most... I have not felt like this for a long time... I like the way you went into deep description with your lines.... truly deep images... take care,..p.d.
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November 25, 2011 at 8:06 PM
This is beautiful and descriptive. In my mind's eye I can see all you've described.
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