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Heartache

Elegantly the clouds dance across the sky The wind whistles A tear falls from my eye But it doesnt matter Because my tears blend in with the raindrops that fall hard to the ground The soil soaks them in Making muddy pools Which drown my feet My heart aches for you... The wind blows the trees

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 10:11:00 AM
Hello Kelli, A very sad write here but sometimes life gives us a journey that we must follow. Love and hurt seem to live together within us sometimes. Life is good honey and it will be better.....Promise As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/25/2011 9:47:00 PM
Kelli, a very heart felt poem.. Sad at the most... I have not felt like this for a long time... I like the way you went into deep description with your lines.... truly deep images... take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/25/2011 8:06:00 PM
This is beautiful and descriptive. In my mind's eye I can see all you've described.
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