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Heartache

Dashed devastated betrayed Annihilated crucified smeared Smashed dribbled drowned Discouraged disbelieving debilitated Life holds less meaning now Unbelievable sadness

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2020 2:44:00 PM

If you are experiencing heartache, your posse’s on its way! Thump..thump...peace! Hugs...Pard’ners in Poetry

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/17/2020 9:02:00 PM

Ha! I am not actually. But thank you. This was for a poetry contest. The goal was to write of heartache in a few words. I think I reached the limit of how many they allowed.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/17/2020 1:50:00 AM

Yet within the gap of cessation, between grief emotion and its amplification, the void virgin, bliss therein surging, in vibrant stillness

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/17/2020 1:52:00 AM

Thank you unseeing seeker.