Heartache

Dashed devastated betrayed
Annihilated crucified smeared
Smashed dribbled drowned
Discouraged disbelieving debilitated
Life holds less meaning now
Unbelievable sadness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 2:44 PM
If you are experiencing heartache, your posse’s on its way! Thump..thump...peace! Hugs...Pard’ners in Poetry
Krutsinger Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 9:02 PM
Ha! I am not actually. But thank you. This was for a poetry contest. The goal was to write of heartache in a few words. I think I reached the limit of how many they allowed.
Seeker Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 1:50 AM
Yet within the gap of cessation, between grief emotion and its amplification, the void virgin, bliss therein surging, in vibrant stillness
Krutsinger Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Thank you unseeing seeker.
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