Get Your Premium Membership

Heart Wanted

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gregory Richard Barden.


This is a reworking of an old poem of mine

__________________________________

I'm looking for a human heart, A brand-new one, por favor, Mine's quite cold and broken, I don't want it anymore. It served a purpose for a while, And it beat with rhythm, sure ... But its seams are old and ragged, Since I heard "goodbye" from her. I'll only need a modest one, I don't plan to use it much, It won't be tasked with loving, Just pumping blood and such. I won't need help exchanging The old one, that's no doubt, There's no surgery required - As she already ... cut it out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/25/2018 2:42:00 AM
There is no other emotion as confusing or as blissful as love....and it is the heart that takes the beating. So well penned Greg! : )
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:36:00 AM
Very well-said, Connie, and you are right ... blessings and thanks to you for the kindness! :-) <3
Date: 10/24/2018 10:00:00 PM
Oh so bitter sweet! Darling penning my friend. Hugs xomo <3
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:35:00 AM
So very kind of you, Maureen ... thank you! :-) <3
Date: 10/24/2018 9:49:00 PM
Delightful... A beauty, Gregory. A definite FAVE for me.
Login to Reply
Barden Avatar
Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:34:00 AM
I'm so pleased you liked it, Line, and thank you for fav-ing! :-) <3

Book: Reflection on the Important Things