Heart Wanted

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This is a reworking of an old poem of mine

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I'm looking for a human heart,
    A brand-new one, por favor,
        Mine's quite cold and broken,
  I don't want it anymore.

It served a purpose for a while,
    And it beat with rhythm, sure ...
        But its seams are old and ragged,
  Since I heard "goodbye" from her.

I'll only need a modest one,
    I don't plan to use it much,
        It won't be tasked with loving,
  Just pumping blood and such.

I won't need help exchanging
    The old one, that's no doubt,
        There's no surgery required -
  As she already ... cut it out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/25/2018 2:42:00 AM
There is no other emotion as confusing or as blissful as love....and it is the heart that takes the beating. So well penned Greg! : )
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:36:00 AM
Very well-said, Connie, and you are right ... blessings and thanks to you for the kindness! :-) <3
Date: 10/24/2018 10:00:00 PM
Oh so bitter sweet! Darling penning my friend. Hugs xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:35:00 AM
So very kind of you, Maureen ... thank you! :-) <3
Date: 10/24/2018 9:49:00 PM
Delightful... A beauty, Gregory. A definite FAVE for me.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:34:00 AM
I'm so pleased you liked it, Line, and thank you for fav-ing! :-) <3
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