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Heart Shaped Stone

Heart shaped stone on a band of gold Once brought happiness and promises... Today the band is restrictive; The stone has lost it's luster Time takes, dims and withers emotions are sad and numb to reality Waiting for...

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Date: 7/30/2010 6:54:00 PM
Your poem reminds me that life is not always easy. Things familiar can become "restrictive" and even painful. I could feel the emotion in your words. Well done.
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Date: 7/30/2010 2:29:00 AM
Hey Doris, this is a wicked little poem, packed with feeling. Tokens of happiness can take on such a different role when a relationship turns sour. It's funny also, that all the quirky things you found attractive, become the very things that really annoy, hehe. Hope that waiting is rewarded with something special. Many thanks for all your lovely comments ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:32:00 AM
What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2010 4:41:00 PM
Glad that you got on...Mom
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Date: 7/27/2010 12:58:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one...So many can relate to this emotive write at least once in their life...Mom
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Date: 7/27/2010 11:04:00 AM
Yes though love is never bound, awesome poem Doris. Thanks for your comments to day. They are very important to me. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/27/2010 10:28:00 AM
...............a better stone!
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Date: 7/27/2010 10:08:00 AM
touching deep!great work Doris,C.C
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