Heart of the Sea

Crashing of the waves 
Slamming against each other,
As the moon lights up the darkness 
In the distance.
Your thoughts are carried away 
Into the Heart of the Sea.
Secrets to be held
Only to be found if searched for.
Lying across the ocean floor 
Like treasures and sadness bound together.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 6:21 PM
This is one good poem. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup... LUcilla
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Great first poem for the soup. Welcome to the soup Lisa.
Munoz Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 5:40 AM
Sounds like my internal battles on my single days lol Good one.
A   Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 10:17 AM
Hi Lisa, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
A  Avatar
October 27, 2013 at 1:27 AM
Lisa, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
Situation Avatar
October 25, 2013 at 1:29 AM
Hard to picture but I get the metaphor.
Britt Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Lisa, Welcome to Soup. I'm also very new, and truly love your entry. Great Job. I can't wait to read more. CTB
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 11:21 PM
I really love this one. Didn't it win? gosh, that is one harsh judge.
Mccall Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:01 AM
Ty, there was alot a good ones maybe next time.
Cannon Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Wonderful use of imagery! So deep!
A  Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 10:26 AM
a very deep poem Lisa, I love it!!! .. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Tacito Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 9:39 AM
This is flat out beautiful. You captured the very, very fragile balance of love & pain. Wonderfully done! It's nice to meet you! =)
Mccall Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Ty :)
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:46 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Lisa ! - Nice to read your first poem here.- Luck in contest! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 3:34 AM
this is nice, , Lisa,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Mccall Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Ty
Lizzy Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 1:10 AM
A nice poem with good imagery
Mccall Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Ty
Cannon Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 12:31 AM
awesome
Vaso Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 12:21 AM
loved this one, beautiful!
Mccall Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Ty
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