Heart of the Garden

Gardens cannot thrive in shade
an ill-fated penurious terrain
like love that's made, but made in vain
gardens cannot thrive in shade

As light hides behind the trees
shadows conceal the reverie
this ground, immortal beauty made
yet gardens cannot thrive in shade

Lilly of the Valley, forget me not's
retain some portion of blame
her shades of blue and soft white hue
a fertile mirage for a spectral fool

Gardens cannot thrive in shade 
for speck of sun that has no place
everything seems to wither in grey
awakening desires endless strain

Tis not this garden I sought to find
in an age I thought I'd left behind
but now as I gaze upon the grey
Its sure my garden wont thrive in shade

A Forrest floor, that's what you are
a bed of amber promise made
A flowerless fern lovely yet sparse 
which seems best loved from afar

How do I tell you 
and where do I start?
all of my flowers are shriveling 
gradually in the garden of my heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/20/2015 9:04:00 AM
Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.
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Date: 2/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Good morning Sarai, nice to see you back.
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Date: 2/5/2015 1:31:00 AM
Sarai, your words seer my soul, as I struggle to relate/empathize. Truly, some life languishes in the shade of deep forest. But then nature in its way brings fire, and life, as the floor comes to life in the brilliance of sunshine. Cycles. One thing always precedes/succeeds the other. Don't close your eyes. My favorite part: a fertile mirage for a spectral fool.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 2/5/2015 5:58:00 AM
love you, thank you.
Date: 12/24/2014 10:04:00 AM
Dropping by to wish you a merry Christmas. Hugs Rick
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Sarai Virden
Date: 2/5/2015 6:00:00 AM
You mean so much to me, thank you.
Date: 12/11/2014 11:06:00 AM
Your poetry is best loved close up. God bless -JT
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Sarai Virden
Date: 2/5/2015 6:00:00 AM
So sweet, thank you... Truly
Date: 12/10/2014 8:13:00 AM
You have such a way with words. Your mind is fertile ground and we are witness to the beutiful flowers that eminate from your soulful soil.
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:24:00 PM
outstanding piece of writing sarai deep golden pen dear friend sending you an irish blessing
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Sarai Virden
Date: 2/5/2015 6:02:00 AM
Always holding you close Liam. Thank you
Date: 11/23/2014 4:18:00 PM
Beautiful poem - I love it. Just remember, however, there's a time, season and reason for everything - including the demise of flowers as do all living things. Flower - power - like your writing: Good stuff Romani:) PS: Nice to meet you, Terry
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Sarai Virden
Date: 2/5/2015 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Terry, nice to meet you too :-)
Date: 11/23/2014 4:22:00 AM
- A beautiful and touching poem on great rhyme Sarai !!! - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2014 11:37:00 AM
So nice that you visited Anne Lise, thank you sweetie. Hugs XOXO Enjoy your Sunday as well.
Date: 11/23/2014 4:08:00 AM
Beautiful, Sarai....I know the feeling. A shriveling flower is a sorry sight. This is an exceptional piece. You wrote very beautifully...
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2014 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Eileen, I think of you often. Enjoy your day sweetie :-)
Date: 11/23/2014 4:07:00 AM
Beautiful...Beautiful...Beautiful!! :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2014 11:33:00 AM
Many thanks
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