Heart of Renewal

Green fall now The sky throwing scenes Day to break Sunset waters glow Day is light to tread Summer thoughts remain

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2021 1:46:00 PM

Wonderful vivid and visceral images, Joe. Best wishes for the contest!

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/20/2021 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Sam, I guess the Quality of other entries will be Quite good, so I'll need it'

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2021 9:59:00 PM

You painted a lovely piece with just a few words.

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/20/2021 2:27:00 PM

Hi Richard, a much appreciated comment '

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2021 4:36:00 PM

Love the imagery!

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/20/2021 2:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Karen'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2021 12:30:00 PM

wow, Joe, thanks for letting me know about this one. I LOVE what you did here. a Fave!!

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/17/2021 1:21:00 PM

You are always kind Andrea Thank you for viewing '