Heart of Renewal

Green fall now
The sky throwing scenes
Day to break

Sunset waters glow
Day is light to tread
Summer thoughts remain
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Kauffman Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Wonderful vivid and visceral images, Joe. Best wishes for the contest!
Maverick Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Thank you Sam, I guess the Quality of other entries will be Quite good, so I'll need it'
Lamoureux Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 9:59 PM
You painted a lovely piece with just a few words.
Maverick Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Hi Richard, a much appreciated comment '
Jones Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 4:36 PM
Love the imagery!
Maverick Avatar
October 20, 2021 at 2:28 PM
Thank you so much Karen'
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 12:30 PM
wow, Joe, thanks for letting me know about this one. I LOVE what you did here. a Fave!!
Maverick Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 1:21 PM
You are always kind Andrea Thank you for viewing '
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