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Heart of Mine

O, heart of mine! You've been so confused. 
In the past, you've been nothing but abused. 
And now that there's someone I want to let in,
You decide your patience has worn thin. 
But heart, I promise! In him, you can trust!
It's so much more than sentiment; 
It's so much more than lust!
This is it! It's the real; it's the truth,
Though such hasty development is so uncouth. 
I'm exposing my emotions, my thoughts to unveil
The simple fact that this just can't fail. 
I swear it to you; I won't ask again. 
Just one last time, please let him in!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/15/2019 3:14:00 PM
Nicely crafted and rhymed Ariane. Welcome to soup. Check the end of your fourth line from the bottom.
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Ariane Hill
Date: 11/15/2019 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for catching that!!! Thank you for the feedback, too! I really appreciate it!