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Heart of Gold

Gonna pull you off that pedestal
                   the one I built of
tough oak and ten penny nails
                    still standing, 
deep in my heart.

Never asked for this broken consolation prize
                   all angels in heaven, 
and my sisters, chastise.

Always hoped you'd be okay, important to say, 
                    you've done well,
you chose so well..
                      in him. 

Still smarts, a memory that saw me red-faced,
                      your lost suitor, lovelorn less or more,  
yet you never made fun, 
                      I've always wondered
why.
                     
Still review life like a film, hope ya don't mind.. 
                      stuck in rewind, 
all these years on..
                      why'd you ever let me get
so close?

Happy for second place, or maybe third,
                       this piece of my life, and yours 
just to be in a heart's running,
                       gold, silver, or bronze
was once, 
                       such a lovely race.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Smith Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 12:11 AM
Important to have some place for outpouring and cleansing of the soul and Poetry seems to be best medium for it and soup seems best outlet I have come across. The way you presented I think will help others who have similar hurdles to overcome. Regards after too long an absence. David in NZ
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Sad to think you were let go by someone this way. you seem amazing to me!! great poem, rick(hope I got the name right)
Greenhough Avatar
December 19, 2023 at 6:10 PM
Most romance says follow your heart, but most success says take a step back. I liked this poem Of intense emotion. Eventually...
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