Heart of a Child

Next door to me, a neighbor In the twilight of his life Is living now with heartache Since the passing of his wife Through years spent together Their bond of love was strong More then a couple, they were one Shared devotion was lifelong Now I see him sitting there Rocking on his porch Lost without her presence Still carrying his torch Today I saw my six year old Walk across his lawn Then he climbed up on his lap To the old man he was drawn They sat together quite a while And never spoke a word He held my son in silence All conversation was deferred When at last my son returned I had to ask him why He said “He's very sad Mom” “I just helped him cry”
I heard this story some time ago and could not forget it. I knew that at some point I would have to put it to rhyme.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/24/2015 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and your sensitive words. Beautiful submission. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/24/2015 4:34:00 PM
Really touched my heart - this was beautifully written. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:10:00 PM
Bob, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:58:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning emotive write Bob!
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Date: 7/24/2015 12:15:00 AM
Dear Bob, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I wish to Congratulate YOU on Your First Place win in In my Contest; "If I had a Broken Heart" 3 years ago I chose YOUR POEM "Heart of a Child" as First Place. I Thank-YOU for Your Patience. I had several people help me cry when I lost my Wife Lenore 'Your POETRY Is From the Heart. LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:56:00 PM
Dear Bob, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS, Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Win in P.D.'s Contest. You will rank high in my contest also. Excellent Heartfelt saddness. With LOVE Always and FOREVER, YOUR Eternal Liege...HG
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/28/2011 10:09:00 AM
Appreciate it Carol
Date: 11/26/2011 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win with this awesome write!!!!!!.....Lori
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/26/2011 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Lori
Date: 11/24/2011 3:44:00 PM
beautiful poem here Bob,well deserved win..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/24/2011 10:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Don
Date: 11/24/2011 11:12:00 AM
Such a touching story and I just love how you brought it to life Bob.. Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beauty ;)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/24/2011 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Wilma. Much appreciated comments
Date: 11/23/2011 11:35:00 PM
BOB, ;-) stopping by to wish you and everyone a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/24/2011 8:34:00 AM
Thank you DP. And a Happy Thanksgiving to you.
Date: 11/8/2011 3:42:00 PM
very touching and nicely written!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/8/2011 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Ilene
Date: 11/8/2011 11:15:00 AM
Wow! This is so perfectly mastered. A lovely yet very heartfelt poem. This piece nearly brought tears to my eyes. Captivating and very well expressed. Your rhymes are perfect and the tale overwhelming. The truth of the child...how innocent and moving!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/8/2011 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne for your lovely comments. The story brought tears to my heart.
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