Heart of a Caged Animal

Cling to the last fragments of your credence 
Forgetting all mistakes and faults 
Forgiving the critics of their impotence 
and slandering those the world exalts 
They can lock an animal in a cage 
Depriving it of its God-given right 
However can never take away its rage 
So they instead put it in a vexatious plight 
Despite this all and control of a tyrant 
Driven by a claim of purity 
A claim of which he needs to recant 
I would have pity for one with such calamity 
But for those who hope wrongdoing on another 
And receive from it some sick sense of pleasure 
I wish for you a long life and pain in which you smother 
For they are great and to them you are of no measure 
As comforting the song of an angel calming the rage of the caged animal and setting it free 
That same angel's song heals the enraged caged animal's wounds inside of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/23/2015 12:49:00 AM
So amazing, Jacob. I am in awe of this verse here as well. Those last two lines are just golden... amazing work... indeed, they cannot take away the rage!!! Fantastic poetry here! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/30/2014 2:43:00 PM
hi and welcome to soup Jacob a strong pen I feel your outrage. However it should be reclassified as verse, a sonnet is 14 lines with 10 syllables per line and all lines need to rhyme. Keep writing and try entering some contests they are an excellent yardstick of how well you are doing hugs
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