Quoth Theraven Poet Rhyme

Heart Movin' On

Must be movin' on now..
you know it's really best.
Leave just before waking dawn,
holding memory close to breast.

Will fingers remember finer place..
lasting rondo round held sway.
Heart promised her gentle face,
from parting at break of day.

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Tara Dawn July 25, 2021 at 3:38 PM Relatable

Beata Agustin July 12, 2021 at 1:28 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 1, 2021 at 5:31 AM "Leave just before waking dawn, holding memory close to breast." How touching and romantic. These two lines made me teary-eyed, Richard. BW ~ Mala

Sara Kendrick June 28, 2021 at 7:38 AM Some people can't get close in relationships because they fear the loss if something happens so they just keep movin' on. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Shirley Hawkins June 26, 2021 at 9:40 PM Nostalgic, loving, romantic, heart- wrenching, beautiful. Take care...Shirley

Eve Roper June 23, 2021 at 9:24 AM Memories are all we have sometimes and it's those moments we remember when we hold them close to heart. Hugs Eve

Sally Eslinger June 23, 2021 at 7:31 AM Hi! I’m back. This is a graceful write. “ lasting rondo round held sway,” fantastic, full sensuality. Blessings and hugs! I’ve had hard woks. See my blog and poem for update. Missed U

Demetrios Trifiatis June 22, 2021 at 11:56 AM Tenderly romantic, dearest Richard. Loved it! Blessings.

Paul Callus June 22, 2021 at 9:12 AM Touching...romantic and sentimental. Some memories are for keeps. Regards // paul

Anitha Jayasankar June 22, 2021 at 4:17 AM A romantic rhyme so emotional.. some memories are so close to the heart ...and can never be erased... but life has to move on... Enjoyed reading Richard.. Have a blessed day.. ~ Ani

Janice Canerdy June 21, 2021 at 8:07 PM Moving and romantic, Richard. Janice

Mystic Rose Rose June 21, 2021 at 10:03 AM we can hold on to such fond memories and they grow fonder as we walk Away at times. A Priceless poem dear poet. have a wonderful day, Thanks for your visit,:)

David Scott June 20, 2021 at 8:31 PM Lovly wrote like the ryhme and verse xx

Juliet Ligon June 20, 2021 at 3:58 PM Enjoyed your sentiments. Even when we move on, memories remain.

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 20, 2021 at 10:50 AM I enjoyed these touching lines, Richard. Well done! :)

Victor Buhagiar June 20, 2021 at 10:08 AM Great emotion. A poem for the heart.

Heidi Sands June 20, 2021 at 9:48 AM Smoothly written Richard and moves the soul too :)

L Milton Hankins June 19, 2021 at 7:05 PM a beautiful poem, Quoth. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

Vijay Pandit June 19, 2021 at 3:27 PM Heart will always remember--enjoyed the rhythmic tone of your poem, Richard.