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Heart Movin' On

Must be movin' on now..
you know it's really best.
Leave just before waking dawn,
holding memory close to breast.

Will fingers remember finer place..
lasting rondo round held sway.
Heart promised her gentle face,
from parting at break of day.

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Tara Dawn

Date: 7/25/2021 3:38:00 PM

Relatable

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/12/2021 1:28:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/1/2021 5:31:00 AM

"Leave just before waking dawn, holding memory close to breast." How touching and romantic. These two lines made me teary-eyed, Richard. BW ~ Mala

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/28/2021 7:38:00 AM

Some people can't get close in relationships because they fear the loss if something happens so they just keep movin' on. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/26/2021 9:40:00 PM

Nostalgic, loving, romantic, heart- wrenching, beautiful. Take care...Shirley

Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2021 9:24:00 AM

Memories are all we have sometimes and it's those moments we remember when we hold them close to heart. Hugs Eve

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/23/2021 7:31:00 AM

Hi! I’m back. This is a graceful write. “ lasting rondo round held sway,” fantastic, full sensuality. Blessings and hugs! I’ve had hard woks. See my blog and poem for update. Missed U

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/22/2021 11:56:00 AM

Tenderly romantic, dearest Richard. Loved it! Blessings.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/22/2021 9:12:00 AM

Touching...romantic and sentimental. Some memories are for keeps. Regards // paul

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 6/22/2021 4:17:00 AM

A romantic rhyme so emotional.. some memories are so close to the heart ...and can never be erased... but life has to move on... Enjoyed reading Richard.. Have a blessed day.. ~ Ani

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2021 8:07:00 PM

Moving and romantic, Richard. Janice

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/21/2021 10:03:00 AM

we can hold on to such fond memories and they grow fonder as we walk Away at times. A Priceless poem dear poet. have a wonderful day, Thanks for your visit,:)