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for Noble Tranquility...

 

 

Unable to use an apostrophe in the title so I have put it as the first line of the title and adjusted the title.  :(  

The correct title is: Heart’s Love Speech

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heart Love Speech

Heart’s Love Speech



My girl (archaic)
has my raincoat.

And I...
Well, I (adverb)...
have never been so -
Happy (pronoun)

to sit outside,
pondside,
in the rain (verb).
Just me and (subordinating conjunction) Basho (pronoun) (archaic).

Drenched,
smiling (preposition)...
I’ve all but - “Yauoooosh!” (interjection) jumped in.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 7:31 AM
Hello Stephe Watson.Rain i love the rain. I enjoy to walk in the drizday my friend.zle or the mist of rain. i like the feel of this rain upon my face. I sense that you do to. Have a nice
Watson Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 12:37 PM
I am honored. Thank you, Catie. Cute can be an honorific, no? :)
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