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Heart Light

The heart light feels what people can't see. Passions reside and the shades to be. Is a smile so shallow and showing so slim? Is the heart's light showing to us so very dim? What will it take to show us so bright. It's that warmth in a smile to hold us tight. How can I show you what I feel inside? I'll use these words and try not to hide. You are the gleam that makes me feel right. Now from my soul is seen a great bright heart light.

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Cassandra Justice

Date: 4/6/2018 8:50:00 PM

How very true. Strange how you can feel so much with your heart but can't always put it in words. Great job.

Anna M Shepard

Date: 4/6/2018 4:02:00 PM

I can figuratively see, you walking from the darkness into the light. Beautifully done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2014 10:54:00 PM

Donald, you never came back. I hope you are well. Goodnight..Linda

Donald Williams
Date: 4/16/2014 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Linda for reminding me to come back. Life changes were difficult for me, but I think I'm ready to move forward now. I missed you all so much.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2013 4:12:00 PM

hello again, checking on you to see if all is well.

Skat A

Date: 6/18/2013 10:31:00 AM

Donald, what ever happened to you? *luv ~ SKAT ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/25/2013 10:15:00 AM

Hello Donald, stopping by to say hi, and wish you a nice memorial day... Hope you are doing well. always~ LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/14/2013 6:53:00 AM

Hi Donald, I havn't seen you around in a while. I hope all is well with you.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/14/2013 1:28:00 AM

Lovely title and theme that carries the whole way through. Hope you are well. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/3/2013 8:51:00 AM

Good morning Donald, Stopping by to say hi, and that I have not seen you around for a while now. Hope everything is well. about your poem: A very different light, kind of a warm glow. I like it, glad you have it in your soul.... always~ Linda

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/30/2013 8:42:00 PM

Hi Donald, I just wanted to drop by to say hello and I was greeted by this Gem. Well done! I hope this hello finds you well.

Nestor Dzenchuo

Date: 4/17/2013 9:29:00 AM

The heart led by the mind, unconfined by illusion of sight, even fear. Probes the inner but fleating beauty that can transform a lifetime, touches the soul and a new realm in sight. Beautiful write Donald.

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 4/15/2013 9:49:00 AM

LIFETIME Premium Member, welcome. Good piece.

Len Gasun

Date: 4/13/2013 8:25:00 AM

Your poem is so beautiful my dear friend Donald. I love every line telling about the heart light especially the 6th line:It's that warmth in a smile to hold us tight. Kudos for this great write my friend! Thank you for sharing and also for your comment on my latest poem. Have a great weekend! love/hugs, Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2013 7:58:00 PM

this has a lot of heart!! And full of light, just like it shows.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2013 1:30:00 PM

We should never be afraid to show our love, share our hearts. - The world needs LOVE! - A very good poem Donald. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)